From: Evan Broder <broder@mit.edu>
Date: Mon, 17 Nov 2008 18:37:54 +0000 (-0500)
Subject: Tweak the language a bit
X-Git-Tag: 0.0.13~4
X-Git-Url: http://xvm.mit.edu/gitweb/invirt/packages/invirt-web.git/commitdiff_plain/04849845c49a37671b5aab3bedfa3b287e6d13f3?ds=sidebyside

Tweak the language a bit

svn path=/trunk/packages/invirt-web/; revision=1707
---

diff --git a/code/main.py b/code/main.py
index 9be2b6c..540b3f4 100755
--- a/code/main.py
+++ b/code/main.py
@@ -431,12 +431,13 @@ def helpHandler(username, state, path, fields):
 The autoinstaller builds a minimal Debian or Ubuntu system to run as a
 ParaVM.  You can access the resulting system by logging into the <a
 href="help?simple=true&subject=ParaVM+Console">serial console server</a>
-with your Kerberos tickets; there is no root password and sshd will
+with your Kerberos tickets; there is no root password so sshd will
 refuse login.</p>
 
-<p>Under the covers the autoinstaller uses our own patched version of
-xen-create-image, which is a tool based on debootstrap.  If you're
-quick in logging into the serial console, you can see it running.
+<p>Under the covers, the autoinstaller uses our own patched version of
+xen-create-image, which is a tool based on debootstrap.  If you log
+into the serial console while the install is running, you can watch
+it.
 """,
                     'ParaVM Console': """
 ParaVM machines do not support local console access over VNC.  To