From: Geoffrey Thomas Date: Tue, 17 Jun 2008 03:05:03 +0000 (-0400) Subject: Rephrase the five paragraphs of price..er..prose X-Git-Tag: sipb-xen-www/3.6~40 X-Git-Url: http://xvm.mit.edu/gitweb/invirt/packages/invirt-web.git/commitdiff_plain/24120ef05bfb029881a7e011c51a2fe569787b21?ds=sidebyside Rephrase the five paragraphs of price..er..prose svn path=/trunk/packages/sipb-xen-www/; revision=608 --- diff --git a/code/templates/unauth.tmpl b/code/templates/unauth.tmpl index 8ce3484..636984b 100644 --- a/code/templates/unauth.tmpl +++ b/code/templates/unauth.tmpl @@ -9,32 +9,43 @@ Intro #def body

XVM — Virtual Servers for MIT

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xvm.mit.edu is a virtualization service for the -MIT community. We offer virtual machines—your -own complete system on which you can start from our two-minute -Debian Linux auto-install or install the operating -system of your choice. The service is free -to any Athena account holder.

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If you're a member of the MIT community, go try out the service -now. You'll need an MIT personal +

xvm.mit.edu is a virtualization service for the MIT +community. We offer virtual machines—your own +complete system on which you can start from our two-minute +Debian install or install the operating system of your +choice. The service is free to any Athena +account holder.

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MIT users:

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Log in to XVM now +
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You'll need an MIT personal certificate.

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The XVM code base is also forthcoming as a free -software project. We've been too lazy to put in a COPYING -file yet, but you can look at our source in our Subversion repo. If you're -interested in using XVM outside MIT, we'd be happy to -help you make it work in your environment; mail us at -xvm@mit.edu.

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XVM features:

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The XVM code base is a free software project under +development, licensed under GPLv2+. If you're interested in using it, +we'd be happy to help you set it up in your environment. Our Subversion +repository is

https://xvm.mit.edu:1111/

xvm.mit.edu is provided by SIPB, -the student computing group at MIT, with generous -funding from IS&T. Like all -SIPB projects, we are independently run by our own team of volunteers, -and we welcome new contributors.

+the student computing group at MIT, with generous funding from IS&T. Like all SIPB projects, we +are independently run by our own team of volunteers, and we welcome new +contributors.

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Questions and feedback welcome at xvm@mit.edu.

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Questions and feedback welcome at xvm@mit.edu.

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