From: Greg Price <price@mit.edu>
Date: Thu, 17 Apr 2008 02:13:28 +0000 (-0400)
Subject: punctuation in about.html
X-Git-Tag: sipb-xen-www/3.4~45
X-Git-Url: http://xvm.mit.edu/gitweb/invirt/packages/invirt-web.git/commitdiff_plain/d44bb757b0fa02160887b62ced56a9c25738a6af

punctuation in about.html

svn path=/trunk/packages/sipb-xen-www/; revision=420
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diff --git a/code/static/about.html b/code/static/about.html
index 9c48a9a..77c8eda 100644
--- a/code/static/about.html
+++ b/code/static/about.html
@@ -19,9 +19,9 @@ SIPB Virtual Servers is an experimental service from the <a href="http://sipb.mi
 Lots of services claim to be beta when they're really almost release-worthy. SIPB Virtual Servers is an alpha service in the true sense of the word. This means that we make almost no promises. Specifically, we make <strong>no promises</strong> about:
 
 <ul>
-<li><strong>Security</strong>: All of the current developers of SIPB Virtual Servers have root access to black-mesa, the host machine for all of the virtual machines through both root and null instances.</li>
+<li><strong>Security</strong>: All of the current developers of SIPB Virtual Servers have root access to black-mesa, the host machine for all of the virtual machines, through both root and null instances.</li>
 <li><strong>Uptime</strong>: The SIPB Virtual Servers developers reserve the right to bring down both black-mesa and its VMs without warning or notification.</li>
-<li><strong>Data integrity</strong>: We do not back up data on SIPB Virtual Servers VMs</li>
+<li><strong>Data integrity</strong>: We do not back up data on SIPB Virtual Servers VMs.</li>
 </ul>
 
 <p>If you're OK with this, we hope you enjoy using and helping us test <a href="/">SIPB Virtual Servers</a>.</p>