From 04849845c49a37671b5aab3bedfa3b287e6d13f3 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Evan Broder
Date: Mon, 17 Nov 2008 13:37:54 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] Tweak the language a bit
svn path=/trunk/packages/invirt-web/; revision=1707
---
code/main.py | 9 +++++----
1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
diff --git a/code/main.py b/code/main.py
index 9be2b6c..540b3f4 100755
--- a/code/main.py
+++ b/code/main.py
@@ -431,12 +431,13 @@ def helpHandler(username, state, path, fields):
The autoinstaller builds a minimal Debian or Ubuntu system to run as a
ParaVM. You can access the resulting system by logging into the serial console server
-with your Kerberos tickets; there is no root password and sshd will
+with your Kerberos tickets; there is no root password so sshd will
refuse login.
-Under the covers the autoinstaller uses our own patched version of
-xen-create-image, which is a tool based on debootstrap. If you're
-quick in logging into the serial console, you can see it running.
+
Under the covers, the autoinstaller uses our own patched version of
+xen-create-image, which is a tool based on debootstrap. If you log
+into the serial console while the install is running, you can watch
+it.
""",
'ParaVM Console': """
ParaVM machines do not support local console access over VNC. To
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